Step 2: What is the email about? The subject line is THE most important line of your
email. Tell the person what the email is about in a few key words. Do not write the
entire email in the subject line, just enough so that the recipient will know. So for
example if you are emailing me with regards to not being allocated into a tutor group
a good subject line would be: the module code (APY1501), and tutor group allocation.
That way the reader will immediately know what the message is about. It also help if
the reader have to forward your email so that the new recipient also know what the
email is about.
Step 3: Saying hello… this can be quite tricky because it depends on the power
relations between you and the people you are emailing, and how well you know them.
A lot of students don’t use a salutation because I think they are unsure what to say
and how to address their lecturer. The easiest way is to start your email by saying
Dear Professor / Dr / Ms followed by their surname. Power relations is key here,
sometimes it is okay to address a person by their first name, but if that person is in a
position of power and you don’t know them, it is better to be slightly more formal,
especially in your first interaction. If you are uncertain, it is always better to address
someone slightly more formally. Another way to approach it is to think about how you
would greet someone if you saw them face to face. Remember there is a person at
the end of the email, so also be polite.
Step 4: Writing the message. Here you want to be as concise as possible. Give the
recipient all of the information that they need to know but no unnecessary information.
Give the necessary context – for example, in an email to your lecturer for APY1501 –
it would be useful to tell them that you are a student in the module, but they don’t need
to know your entire life story unless it relates to the request. So for example if you had
a problem with submitting an assignment because you were robbed of your computer,